My monster

we learnt to try do more information about our character to try make to reader more excited that he or she want to read more. I did not finish all my work but I will finish it later on. What should I do next for my work?

describing Queen Elizbeth

To day I was learning how to do similes in my writing. And when I'm writing I have to highlight the word's that mean the same but with better word's then saying said you could say told.