I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Great job! Your similes are really cool, and the slide show format makes it really interesting to read. I like how you completed what the task was asking you to do and then went above and beyond by giving the reader a little explanation on what similes are and how they are best used to improve your writing. Great stuff!
I'm looking forward to seeing more amazing work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Hey Natalie,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Great job! Your similes are really cool, and the slide show format makes it really interesting to read. I like how you completed what the task was asking you to do and then went above and beyond by giving the reader a little explanation on what similes are and how they are best used to improve your writing. Great stuff!
I'm looking forward to seeing more amazing work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel