we learnt to try do more information about our character to try make to reader more excited that he or she want to read more. I did not finish all my work but I will finish it later on. What should I do next for my work?
Hi natalie, one thing i really like about your monster is what they eat and some more information about the monsters. i like how you told us where a demogorgon lives. maybe you could tell us more information about the mined flyar?
Hi natalie,
ReplyDeleteone thing i really like about your monster is what they eat and some more information about the monsters. i like how you told us where a demogorgon lives.
maybe you could tell us more information about the mined flyar?
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